Thanks so much to everyone that gave me advice on how to advertise my new business , I am on very tight budget and you gave me loads of brilliant ideas!!! One of them being a website with freewebs. Check it out and let me know what you honestly think.

www.freewebs.com/tiptopnailextensions

Hi,
It looks good the only thing that drove me mad were the butterflies flapping round which put me off reading lol
But a nice site well done xx

It's a really good website, I like the way you have the price list and the aftercare advice on there and the childrens party is a great idea of getting a younger clientelle too!!
Loving the pink and butterflies!!
Great job!!
Hope all goes well

Hi,

Firstly, I would change the word from "extensions" to "enhancements". Extensions just sound so cheap and nasty.

Secondly, you have spelled "available" wrong under "Gift Vouchers are available".

Thirdly, I would tidy up your price list a bit as at the moment it's all over the place and not very easy to read.

Have to be honest when I say I didn't like the butterflies. They seem to just get in the way and are very distracting.

Also, why are you selling L&P kits ? Is that something that you do ??


Other than that, you've done a fab job !


River

I agree about the butterflies ... i dont like them in real life either

Also ... I just wondered why you have a page for products selling a whole kit?? Surely some clients may think that it maybe cheaper in the long run if they bought the kit instead of using you for the services ... little do they know about the harm they could do to themselves with these products!

I'll take the butterflies off then, i don't want it to put off potential clients! Thanks.
To be honest, I don't really know why I put kits in the products section. That's sounds quite bad doesn't it?!!!!!
I will get to changing the price list layout too.
Thanks so much for taking a look.

Had a look - great website well done - did you do this yourself?

I do agree with the comments that have been made - just one thing to add - you dont mention your name on there anywhere - this is always something I like to see if I am dealing with one person.

HTH

I also don't like the idea of the kits being on there. But, if you decide to leave them there, you have professional spelled incorrectly on all three kits.
I know you said that you're on a budget but I'd do something about the URL. You can buy domain names SO cheap. I'd buy a domain name and have it forwarded to where you built your page. You need something easy and memorable to your clients and potential clients. You can actually get a site for about $100 a year. That's in USD but only breaks down to less than $8.50 a month. Pretty cheap. Maybe look into it later. But I'd definitely get a domain name now if you have any intentions of giving the link out to people. It just looks so much more professional.
Great job on the site!
Michele

well done.. i agree with the comments already made and i didn't see any butterflies so perhaps you have removed them?

well done anyway! you must be very pleased