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Published by *flower*
24-01-07 |
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24-01-07, 07:31 PM
thank you all for your comments - i really appreciate it...
i agree about the line of light joanne.. i noticed it myself after seeing the picture.. i will work harder to smooth and even the surface more next time.. Quote:
sorry.. i didnt think about taking side views.. i will make sure i take one next time.. |
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24-01-07, 07:44 PM
It is hard to really tell Anna because I think the lighting is distorting the whole image. I think you have truly transformed this lady's hands, boy was there some trauma there! I like the length, a nice workable length and then I like my whites to be at that type of white to pink ratio. Nice natural smiles too.
However it looks like your apex is too far forward in zone 2 and is creeping into zone 1 - you can see it more on the thumb and the pinkie. Your line of light looks very wonky, but I think this is made worse by your lighting in the room. So I think your main focus is to work on your apex placement and your line of light! They look nice and flush in zone 3, but the pic is not too clear to confirm this. Great job xxx |
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24-01-07, 07:59 PM
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i will defin take on board what you have said and i will try and improve on the apex placement and line of light.. thank you sassy.. |