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Sculpted French
Published by VHunter
03-02-07
Sculpted French

This is a sculpt that I did recently. I HOPE that you see improvement compared to my previous sculpts.
As with the previous critique I submitted, I know where I see fault. But I want to know what you all think.

Please give it to me straight.

Thanks!!
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Length
60%60%60%
3.0
Shape
70%70%70%
3.5
Sidewalls and edges
50%50%50%
2.5
Apex Placement
40%40%40%
2.0
Smile Line
60%60%60%
3.0
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03-02-07, 05:58 AM

I am not that good to put raiting, but in my eyes they looks great
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03-02-07, 06:29 AM

Definately getting alot better. Some of extension edges (mostly the pinkies) & smiles are a little are a little inconsistant.On of the thumbs looks a bit flat & not sure on a couple of the other apexes look off, but that might just be the pic.
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03-02-07, 07:05 AM

Getting better! The tips are tending to fan out a bit and the thumbs look shorter than the rest, check the line your sculpting to on the form is the same on all nails unless you`ve got a bitten nail , your smile lines look ok nice bit of jewellery for the pic. Well done for posting your work!!!
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03-02-07, 02:34 PM

I definately agree with what's been said.
She's a biter... and with forms, I have trouble still getting the gel too wide and filing a tonne off Drives me NUTS.

I agree with the pinkies too. I was trying to hide her smile line, but at the same time balance the nails? Tricky to do with a biter and no camouflage gel (but hopefully this will improve as I NOW have camouflage gel whoohooo)
I know I did improve... BUT I also know there's still room for lots more improvement on my sculpts.

Thanks for taking the time to look!
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04-02-07, 12:53 AM

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I definately agree with what's been said.
She's a biter... and with forms, I have trouble still getting the gel too wide and filing a tonne off Drives me NUTS.
When I sculpt with gel, if I think it's a bit wide, I wipe off my brush on a pad dampened with scrubfresh, and run it along the egdes to tidy them up and bring it in (just like tidying up your smiles)
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04-02-07, 03:01 PM

nails look nice, but not consistant, some have soft look, some sharp, the quality of the picture is so good, i can see every hair on every knuckle.
The jump in the sidewall of the thumb + the shape of all the others makes me think this "jump" would be in all the nails. This "jump" makes for a weakness throughout and this is where the nails will break.
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04-02-07, 03:36 PM

Yeah, I have my camera set at the highest dpi for better quality pics, then I use the macro setting on top of that LOL
THEN I crop and zoom in on just the 'subject'. I rarely have probs with my pics LOL

Me too, I found the shape off... had a hard time with her. I "think" she's a jumper naturally, but I could be wrong. Could be the way I had the forms. She's a biter... so I had a hard time, as you well know. Not that I dont already have a hard time mastering sculpting... but I'm trying

Thanks again.
I'm hoping this monday, will be a much better sculpt.
Trying a new gel.. so... we'll see

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