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Massively geeky
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Join Date: Apr 2011
Location: Manchester
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New website launched...please have a peek! -
25-03-12, 09:59 PM
www.awaesthetics.com
Hi everyone! We've been fine tuning the site to make it a lot more cohesive and like a 'brand' Could you please take a quick 30 second look and give me feedback positive or negative! I really don't mind so feel free to be as critical as you want! BotoxBoy |
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Geeky
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Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Scotland
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25-03-12, 10:15 PM
Just had a wee peek at your site and I think it looks great! The text is easy to read. I downloaded the pdfs in 'treatment menu' and really like that you give the info about the treatments before the prices. I don't know much about these treatments and I understood everything (I think!)
I think its great! Well done! |
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Grand Geek
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Brighton
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25-03-12, 10:24 PM
I agree with the above. The layout is clear and concise and navigation is easy.
The only 2 things I spotted that I dont like so much are the line on the homepage 'anti-wrinkle injections and dermal fillers clinic'. For some reason it just doesn't read right. Maybe because it has two plural words in the sentence and then clinic at the end. Im not sure, but for me it's not quite right. Also, IMO I don't like sites that are written in the third person. If you are the only one doing the treatments and its your clinic, I think the website should be written in the first person. I believe it makes it more personal and friendly. x |
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Freaky geeky
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Basingstoke
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29-03-12, 12:34 PM
Others are right about losing the clinic bit. Also where it says
One of the best parts of this job is making people feel better about themselves - it may sound a bit more eloquent to say My vocation(or mission) is making people feel better about themselves. Less wordy IMHO. |
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Massively geeky
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Location: Manchester
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29-03-12, 10:26 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: essex
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29-03-12, 11:07 PM
I think the site is great! Very clear and comprehensive. I like the colours too. I proof read documents in my day job and I've read it all and haven't picked anything up
However, may I ask the expert a wee question...? I have deep verticle frown lines that are there at resting... If that's the right phrase... Would botox plump these out? Also I'm hoping to have IVF shortly and wonder if botox is safe in pregnancy? May i add, its amazing how quick these have appeared. When I'm under pressure or tired I frown and have only noticed this since last summer. I just can't stop myself but they are really deep now. I'm 33 and feel a bit young to have such seriously bad wrinkles in my face lol Thanks in advance for any suggestions Sparkles xx Sent from my HTC Sensation using SalonGeek |
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Massively geeky
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Location: Manchester
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29-03-12, 11:27 PM
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As for your question, Botox doesn't plump up a line but can stop it forming if it's caused by the muscles. If its a deep line at rest you may need a filler. Being pregnant or trying to become pregnant is an absolute contraindication to having Botox or fillers I'm afraid! |
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Grand Geek
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Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: www.kimlawless.com
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29-03-12, 11:36 PM
Fantastic looking site and very professional. My only comment would be that the pic on your home page of the guy with the metal on his face……I know it's meant to look edgy but I think it makes the site look more like a beauty salon or dare I say something kinky, rather than medical. The rest is superb. Great job.
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Geek
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Location: essex
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30-03-12, 08:21 AM
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Real geeky
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Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Queensland, Australia
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30-03-12, 01:13 PM
Professional, sleek, elegant. I think its wonderful! If researching for this type of service I would find your website reassuring. There is enough content to demonstrate you know your subject and have a passion for it, without being overwhelming or dull. Well done!
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Surrey
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30-03-12, 04:18 PM
I love it.
The colours and font and everything is gorgeous and so easy to read. Makes perfect sense to someone like me who doesn't have a clue about any of it. I agree with Kim and also about the "clinic" wording. Great job xx |
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Freaky geeky
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Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: Surrey
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30-03-12, 04:59 PM
Hiya, I really admire your work but to be very honest I really don't like your website.
The guy on the home page is odd- what are the metal buttons stick to his face for? What does he represent? The colours are very contrasting and somehow don't make it trustworthy. If I didn't know you from here I would not be convinced by your website. It's too edgy for my likings. Although that 's probably the look you're after. If I was looking for aesthetic services I would turn to the company with a bit softer image, as this website makes me somehow uncomfortable. I don't feel like I even want to browse it. But it's me and I am only expressing my opinion. I was thinking from yesterday if I should tell you that because I don't want to offend you!!! I Know that probably there will be people here jumping on me how dare I Like I am saying it's my opinion. Please don't get annoyed xxxxxxxxxx You can't please everyone they say! So as long as majority likes it- that's great xxx |
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Massively geeky
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Location: Manchester
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30-03-12, 07:36 PM
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