Hi All,

I'm just busy doing my spring / summer promotion (late I know !) and was hoping some of you Geeks could help with a particular part of the wording.

The sentence goes:

"Treat your feet to the ultimate pedicure with the award winning SpaPedicure from Creative Nail Design".

So far so good. The problem I have is putting the price in. How do I word it ?

I was thinking of saying "Spring Offer - £20", but that sounds too abrupt. I don't really want to use words like " for only, or only or special offer".


Any ideas would be welcome !


Thanks

River

Spring offer £20 for a limited time only

Better, but wouldn't I have to state when the offer finishes then ?



River

yes you would have to put when offer ends
spring offer £20 limited time only* Then at the bottom of flyer (what ever its going on)you can put the date that it finishes in small wording.make sure you put the year as well as you wouldnt want someone finding a stray leaflet in a couple of years time

Treat your feet to this amazing spring offer of £20
or
Treat your feet for spring for £20

Hi,

Some good suggestions ladies.

How does this sound ? I'm still not entirely happy with the "price section" .......





River

Sounds brill, price went up though. lol

Yep River that sound pretty good. x

Have to charge more for all this thinking !!

(Typed it in wrong the first time.....)


THANKS for all your help, much appreciated.


River

it ok to leave it like then they want to take advantage of the special and you can put at the bottom of your prices subject to change