What do you think of this style?

[Hairflair'xo]

I started vrq level one in September and today was my first practice at styling! I started off doing a brickwork set, then brushed it out and styled it, I know it has alot of flaws but do you guys think the idea is good? And how could I improve? Thanks xox

 

[katie1991]

That's a cute little style perhaps if the hair was longer it would look nicer in looser curls. Maybe try and get the top into a separate quiff. To the right it seems a bit loose as its going to the side. Very good effort though. Well done