I love the look, think its great. What was the client going for?
Constructive wise: im not keen on the eyebrow shade, could be much more natural. (maybe tint beforehand)
Smokey eye-depends on client really, i would have blended more.
Lipgloss, i would have used a lipstick more nude for the look, but still goes really well. Blusher wise bit more contouring so more sculpted effect. (irridescent powder is good)
Also lashes wise i would have added strip or individuals for that wow effect, as the mascaras looking faded. (mac opulash is one of my faves)
To be fair i think you've done a nice job, but these are really small things that if you step back and look, you'll know. Good luck xoxo