Feedback on my website

[Urban Rays]

Hi

Could you please give feedback on my new site please. I was going to go down a free webs route but found someone on here with brill rates, in my area too. I was also imressed how quickly they got me high up in google.

I am just not sure if it looks to dark, the salon s contemporary, was trying to et the same feel with the web site.

Thanks for any input either good or bad


www.urbanrays.co.uk

 

[redsadie]

Hi there

Your site looks great, if a little dark, but it's still easy to read

Couple of things, your online store button goes to a domain holding page, I think it would be wise to get at least a 1 page site up for the time being until you have your proper one up and running. On page one it says 'google' instead of goggle! And some people may want to know what make the beds are, but great site all round really. Well done

 

[rachael204]

Looks good!!

Just a few spelling mistakes!! (my mums a teacher and have been trained from an early age to notice these things!!)

where you have "we offer more than other salons" you have spelt goggles and deodorant wrong!!

hth xx

 

[Urban Rays]

Hi

Thanks for your observations, I know they are working on the site to get rid of a couple of faults, something about w3, you may as well speak jiberish, i dont undertand a word

I will let them know to change the spelling mistakes.

Was more concerned with the colours of the site I am umming and r'ing if I should go with black and white text or vice versa.

 

[redsadie]

I think sometimes the black background with white writing is easier for people to read. x

 

[smartbookings]

I would use some more lighter colours as first impressions of your site didn't really make me think tanning salon, I would go for much lighter colours with a nice big image near the top of the page so it's the first thing people see.

Good luck with your site though!

 

[Annebet]

Hiya I think I would use light colours made all my eyes blary trying to read it lol but looks good apart from what others have said. Good Luck .

 

[Gelly]

Hi
I like a black background but would suggest using light grey text as it doesn't seem to 'glare' as much as white on black.

I would also change the red (except the bit where you are saying RED) to maybe a purple - or another colour that is still bright but works better with the teal.

HTH