My Advertising Feed Back Wanted Please.

[Klassy Klaws]

As I have taken the big step and gone out on my own full time
I thought I needed to get some offers out there to encourage some more clients.
As this is all new to me I was looking for some feed back on my flyer's.
Please take a look and let me know what you think:hug:

 

[Noodle]

I think your flyers are lovely Karen and very eye-catching (which is, let's face it, exactly what you want to achieve).

Wishing you every success with your solo venture :hug: xx

 

[sj1973]

i think the same as noodle....in ya face flyers and that will get you attention which is what you need....well done xx

 

[hayls]

Brill flyers hun!
Just one thing....isnt it Mother's Day?!

Great though, they should bring in the masses!

xxxxxxxxxx:hug:

 

[Nyx]

The only thing i would suggest is wrapping your text in the pics rather than having white text boxes on the offers ones. Give a better look. But thats just my view.

Good luck

 

[JoJoPearce]

They look fantastic and good luck with going alone.

I need to get my butt into gear and make the brave jump (been saying this for forever) and open up my home salon. I have no excuse now as the room was plastered b4 christmas.

 

[dee]

they are lovely , esp the last one , agree with above poster about wrapping the text i think it might look a little bit better , :hug: xx

 

[Klassy Klaws]

Brill flyers hun!
Just one thing....isnt it Mother's Day?!

Great though, they should bring in the masses!

xxxxxxxxxx:hug:

Doh thats what happens when you don't concentrate!!:lol:

 

[min11]

I think they are great! I'm having trouble making flyers but you seem to have a knack for it. I'd certainly take notice if one of those came through my door :hug:

 

[Martigirl]

Well done Karen they are looking good.

The only comments I would make is to only have 1 copy of the same image as it looks too "busy" for me with 2 identical images.

I wouldn't have my home address advertised I would only give this to confirmed appointments.

That is only a personal opinion I am no expert on advertising.

hth's:hug:

 

[rouge]

I think they're really nice!
But on the first one you've put '10% OF all waxing', it should be '10% OFF'!

 

[blossom]

I think they're lovely, good luck x

 

[hippy-chick]

very eye-catching.

 

[minime1]

im only saying this from pass leaflet drops,

but i have found that when a leaflet is simple, for example £10.00 off a hot stone back massage i get more response from it. I would take a few of the picture off and make the texts stand out abit more.
I did an all dancing/singing leaflet but only got 2 people from it, then when i did a simple design it worked much better, i think it cause it only took 5 seconds to read and the customer could decided if they wanted it or not.

Also i think limiting the offers on a leaflet to say 1 or 2 so your putting over a stronger selling point.

hope that helps.
cheers
Natasha

 

[chantell simone]

i like them all

well done

not sure if you should have you home address on though