My website, opinion please?

[Ditzy]

Hiya peeps!

I've built a website, it's far from finished, but I'd like some opinions before I get too far with it.

I have to put more pics in the gallery, and I have more services to add (such as eyelash/brow tinting etc), and I need to add more info about products and other niggly bits, but would like some constructive criticism on other aspects please.

Thank you my lovelies!

Cheesecake Make-Up and Nails |

 

[~Emmsybabes~]

Hello hun,
Firstly let me say how cool the picture of the young girl in a fight make up is..
Me and my little girl have just stared at it for ages lol,
The first thing that stood out to me, is how low your rebalance prices are compared to your full sets,
Can I ask why ?
There is the same, if not more work involved in a rebalance, especially a 4 week one,
I'd up those prices hunny,

I love the name too, very original and well thought out x

 

[oey]

Looking good.

Personally I would put the explanation of your name on your home page as the pictures on your home page dont look relevant at that point. With the name explanation it will tie it all in.

Then use your spare page towards focusing more on the treatments that you do.

 

[Ruth Mills]

Nice work!

Am going to be a bit nit-picky now so I hope you aren't offended

On your home page, there is a "~" symbol at the start of the second sentence ("~Based in Hellesdon, Norwich")... is that meant to be there?

On your Rates & Services page, you are using a colon instead of a decimal point for your prices, e.g. £25:00 instead of £25.00 - I think it would look better if you used the decimal point, as colons are normally used for times.

There's a leading space at the start of the text for 3 week rebalance which is making that not line up with the other entries on the page.

The only other thing I'd say is that the text on your navigation links is a bit small to my eyes - it might be easier for partially sighted people to see if you made it a bit bigger.

But, so saying, you've got the start of what looks like a really nice web site!

 

[Ditzy]

Thanks for all the nice comments, and all advice gladly welcomed and taken on board, and probably gonna be done :green:

Keep it coming:wink2:

 

[Brandywine]

Hello, can I just say its nice to see someone else from Norwich!
Your website was easy to navigate and I like your idea for the name Cheesecake and "real" women. I can't help with spellings or punctuation as I'm useless at that sort of thing. Well done looks like a good start ( with my untrained eyes).