My website, your thoughts please

[jo1983]

Hi Geeks

I have just published my new website and I would love to know all of your thoughts! I was suprised how long it has taken me, and I'm just wondering if there is anything that I have missed or anything you think I dont need??

 

[spraytangeek]

iev just a had a quick look but it looks good to me, well done!

 

[jo1983]

iev just a had a quick look but it looks good to me, well done!

ive just a nosy at ur website and I love how the font changes when you select the page!

 

[Helen v]

Hi, just had a look at your site and well done it looks lovely. your wording sounds very professional. the only thing i couldnt see was operating/opening hours, you may have done this on purpose but just my opinion, i wouldnt want my mobile ringing at all hours every day of the week. You will need some time out some times.

But again well done is does look great.

Helen xx

 

[butterfly100]

Looks really fresh and informative. A couple of small things I noticed

Home Page - after the word exhibitions (in pink) you need a space.
-after the words 'exhibition stand' you need a commer before 'Pamper Me'.

Treatment Menu - In the 1st paragragh under 'Zone Therapy' should read 'all the clients' and not 'the all clientss' and also it should be 'find' and not 'finds' .

Under the heading 'Lymph aroma facial' where you say about the products you use.... you say 'I' where as throughout the site you are using 'we'. I think it should be one or the other.

Under Hopi Ear Candling- scalp 'and facial massage' needs a space between 'facial' and 'massage'.

Under Warm Wax- 'Muslim' should be spelt 'Muslin'

There may be a couple of other small things but thats all I noticed.

Well done and good luck!

 

[spraytangeek]

ive just a nosy at ur website and I love how the font changes when you select the page!

Thank u hun! x

 

[Jenx]

It looks lovely, very fresh and easy to navigate.
Well done.
Jen xx

 

[Beautification]

£11 for a lash perm? are u crazy? lol i charge £18 and it's still £7 cheaper than everywhere

 

[jo1983]

Hi, just had a look at your site and well done it looks lovely. your wording sounds very professional. the only thing i couldnt see was operating/opening hours, you may have done this on purpose but just my opinion, i wouldnt want my mobile ringing at all hours every day of the week. You will need some time out some times.

But again well done is does look great.

Helen xx

ooooohhh, thank you for spotting that! I will definately have to update that!

 

[angelina221]

£11 for a lash perm? are u crazy? lol i charge £18 and it's still £7 cheaper than everywhere

Yeah i thought that-lol
I charge £24.
Nice simple site and easy to navigate

 

[jo1983]

Looks really fresh and informative. A couple of small things I noticed

Home Page - after the word exhibitions (in pink) you need a space.
-after the words 'exhibition stand' you need a commer before 'Pamper Me'.

Treatment Menu - In the 1st paragragh under 'Zone Therapy' should read 'all the clients' and not 'the all clientss' and also it should be 'find' and not 'finds' .

Under the heading 'Lymph aroma facial' where you say about the products you use.... you say 'I' where as throughout the site you are using 'we'. I think it should be one or the other.

Under Hopi Ear Candling- scalp 'and facial massage' needs a space between 'facial' and 'massage'.

Under Warm Wax- 'Muslim' should be spelt 'Muslin'

There may be a couple of other small things but thats all I noticed.

Well done and good luck!

Thank you soooooooooooo much for taking the time to read the content of my website, I have altered my mistakes, and hopefully I haven't offended any Muslim's lol!!!!! Im very embarassed about the spelling mistake!!!:o

xxxx

 

[jo1983]

It looks lovely, very fresh and easy to navigate.
Well done.
Jen xx

thank you xxx

 

[jo1983]

£11 for a lash perm? are u crazy? lol i charge £18 and it's still £7 cheaper than everywhere

aaaahhhh!!! I see your point, think I need to have a look at that! I had a wee look at ur website, I like that you have added an explanation to what ther perm does, would you mind if I nick your explanation??(will reword it slightly!)

 

[jo1983]

Yeah i thought that-lol
I charge £24.
Nice simple site and easy to navigate

Thank you, I've increased the price to £19.00. I really like your site, particularily your pictures. I'm thinking about taking some pics of my room to personalise it, I've hade to use stock pics to start off with!:lol:

 

[Ruthlm]

Hiya, your website is lovely, easy to navigate, and good explinations of what you offer, maybe a gallery page?? I always like to see examples of work, maybe a picture of your beauty room, and something I am going to do is ask a few of my clients to write a testimonial, so I can publish it on my site xx well done, ruth

 

[jo1983]

Hiya, your website is lovely, easy to navigate, and good explinations of what you offer, maybe a gallery page?? I always like to see examples of work, maybe a picture of your beauty room, and something I am going to do is ask a few of my clients to write a testimonial, so I can publish it on my site xx well done, ruth

I can see your point about the testimonial, I think i'm gunna add some soon, just waiting on getting some back! thought I would add a picture of the client with each testimonial!
And i'm definately going to add some tretment room pics asap!!!!:lol: