Thoughts and comments

[Ashton]

Hey I'm new here and would like some real advice on what you think on my work, I've been practicing on myself for a while getting ready to hopefully have a head start on a college course id like to sign up to in september
Sorry about rubbish quality any advice please

Hope it works I'll add acoupleof links
Thankyou

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