tried... think i've failed

[aimie x]

hi geeks need a little help. stared doing a free yola site and i think its a mess, my cameras not focusing properly on my nail desigins so only the plainer ones are passable, cant put photos of myself ( at the about me part ) on because i have none of me in my tunic looking professional. and theres only limited things i can do e.g. font and layout etc i have a picture in my head of what i want but cant do it, so anyhelp to what else to add if its possible or any web builder sites that give you so much time free etc. ( cant say insured by whoever either waiting on the paperwork coming in from a company so not insured as of yet hopefully at the end of the week )

www.greenockmobilebeauty.yolasite.com

critisim i can work on please x
thanks all

 

[Tonimaxwill]

hi geeks need a little help. stared doing a free yola site and i think its a mess, my cameras not focusing properly on my nail desigins so only the plainer ones are passable, cant put photos of myself ( at the about me part ) on because i have none of me in my tunic looking professional. and theres only limited things i can do e.g. font and layout etc i have a picture in my head of what i want but cant do it, so anyhelp to what else to add if its possible or any web builder sites that give you so much time free etc. ( cant say insured by whoever either waiting on the paperwork coming in from a company so not insured as of yet hopefully at the end of the week )

[email protected]

critisim i can work on please x
thanks all

Hi Aimie

I can't open your link, can you check its correct

Annie

 

[aimie x]

Hi Aimie

I can't open your link, can you check its correct

Annie

sorry was wrong lol fixed it now

 

[Tonimaxwill]

You have not failed :hug:

It does need a few tweeks and I am sure some of the other geeks can you more advice. My comments are more about the consistancy. I love your bar across the top and think you have the base for a great site my comments are

• you say I and we on page one, you need to be consistant so pick one or the other
• Check your alignment on the price page it seems to be out slightly
• Check that when typing you either start all with capitals or all lower case (again be consistant)
• On the home page you say you do your treatments for less, sound like a negative to me - do you need to say that your cheaper?
• I also think that you need to have more confidence in yourself as you sound almost aplogetic on some pages

I find it easier to talk about others than I do about myself, I think when people talk about their abilities they play them down, you need to sell yourself more. Hope you find this usefull and it is only my opinion