Website feedback please

[Hopena23]

Hi guys. Could I please ask you kindly if you will have a spare moment (I know how busy life could be) to check my latest creation... well its not mine I paid someone to make it for me, but the amount of hell this person went with me, i am sure he did regret saying yes to me
So if I could kindly ask you to check my website and if you can give me your feedback if you think something is just not right I will highly appreciate it.
Massive thank you in advance. My webpage : Home | Valentina's EssenceValentina’s Essence | Valentina's Essence Beauty Therapy Southampton

 

[Chrysalis]

Hi it looks lovely.
Typo error on thong bikini bottom chicks,
And my god you do long hours!!!

 

[mm29]

Love your website
Can I ask who done it for you??

Typo "knickers line" should it be knicker line

 

[mm29]

Followed by painting the nails with chosen by you colour. (Manicure £19)

 

[Chrysalis]

Just read the about page, the English and grammar need polishing as it doesn't read correctly

 

[Hopena23]

Thank you girls so much for taking your time, I will look into it.xx
p.s this is the guy who did it for me, if anyone will use his services just mention project Valentina's Essence and he will give you a discount.
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[Hopena23]

Just read the about page, the English and grammar need polishing as it doesn't read correctly

Hi Chrysalis,thank you for your feedback, could you kindly specify what does not read correctly in About page ?
Thank you in advance