Help needed advertising !!!!

[linky18]

Hello Everyone

I am just starting out as a mobile technician and am looking to advertise for models to practise on and was just wanting some advise what do you think of this ??

Models wanted !!
Angel Nails is looking for models for acrylic nails 20% discount off your first full set of nails and nail art free if you want that little bit extra. Get your nails done in the comfort of your own home and relax . Don't forget ladies its valentines day soon spoil yourself and give me a call on 079********
ask for Rachel

What do you think your feed back is welcome good or bad

Thanks

*****Rachel:lol: Angel Nails*****

 

[xAnnaBannAx]

I think that sounds good...nice and friendly...try it and see what happens! x

 

[geeg]

Models wanted !!
Angel Nails is looking for models for acrylic nails.
I am offering A 20% SAVING off your first full set of nails and nail art free if you want that little bit of extra BLING.
Have your nails done in the comfort of your own home and relax .
Don't forget ladies its valentines day soon so spoil yourself and give me a call on 079********
ask for Rachel
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I WOULD INCLUDE THE PRICE AS PEOPLE DO NOT LIKE TO CALL TO ASK THE PRICE. NO SURPRISES.

I WOULD NEVER EVER USE THE WORD DISCOUNT WHICH GIVES THE IMPRESSION THAT YOU ARE DESPERATE AND IT CHEAPENS PEOPLES PERCEPTION OF YOUR SERVICE.

I HOPE IT IS SUCCESSFUL FOR YOU.​

 

[Shellkelly]

Is the nail art free just on the first full set?
I've just completed the nail art course and I'm wanting to do either gel or acrylics next and personally I would charge extra for the art even if it's a couple of pounds.