help with wording a letter.....

[sodabubble]

I am this weekend planning to send of a letter to all the local dance schools in my area, and retirement homes, promoting my mobile services (mainly spray tans for the dance schools and file& polishes for the retired ladies) but I am really struggling with wording the letters, I have been trying all day but I either keep waffling on or the words just don't look right. I think I have hit a mental block and am really struggling! can you help? xx

 

[The Guild]

Hi,

Try putting things into bullet points. This will make sure that you keep your information brief and clear. It will also make it quicker and easier for the recipients to read.

 

[sodabubble]

ok, its an idea - but would it appear rude? i am really panicking about making myself look professional on paper! thanks a lot for the advice though xx

 

[lisac]

hi im sorry im thinking of doing the same thing and was interested in what you came up with in the end and if it worked for you thanks
lisac