They look fab huni, without better focus it's had to tell. Amazing working considering you've just qualified, make sure you leave a small margin around the cuticle and side walls. (Again it's hard to see due to the focus) I'm being very anal but that's all I would point out.
However I would be more than happy for you to do my nails. The only advice I can give is be a perfectionist and with more experience you'll fly.