Pink nails - first critique

[lauraj]

I did these about 3 month after i passed my course so they are quite an old set but i still like them a lot so i thought i would post them for some feedback

 

[ValencianNails]

Well done on posting for critique

Those nails would look so much more prettier if the smile lines were 'smiling' as opposed to being straighter.
Personally I'm not keen on the ring finger 3d art, but that's just me :wink2:
You could do with more 'finishing', especially on the thumb nail which looks quite uneven. Your zone 3 blending looks nice and flush.

Look forward to seeing more of your work

 

[honeycure]

I agree with Valencia. The smile lines would be more flattering if they were curved a bit more. Also, make sure you get your lines even through out the whole nail, including the sides. I noticed that the white line on your thumb kinda thins out at the side, and the line on your pinky is a bit thin compared to the rest.

As for the 3d art, that's really cute! My suggestion would be to make the knot a bit smaller though.

 

[lauraj]

thanks for the advice