Website builder - First timer

[chrogers]

Hi everyone,

Ive literally just finished making my very first website.

I have been sayingI would make one for about 5 years now... I was just wondering if one or two of you would mind having a little nosey through for me as if they were a client.

Any feedback is welcome good or bad...

The website address is:-

Home - Fingersntoes

Thank you in advance

Jody

 

[chrogers]

**bump**

 

[Miss-Hallx]

Eye treatments...
The part where it states that a patch test would be required should be below even the airbrush make up, it may look differently on the standard web page but it looks a little out of place on the mobile version.

Other than that I think it looks fab! Xx

 

[Rosiejo]

Hi Jody!

Don't know a lot about websites but have had a mooch about yours and its lovely- very easy to navigate and clear to read.

Well done and good luck for future business that's comes from it. Xx

 

[Miss-Hallx]

Quick question to you now - I've also built my website using moonfruit, I currently use the "free" one and plan on buying the domain name. Does this mean I need a web host? Or would I pay for the monthly thing? I've spent ages working on my web page and don't want it to be for nothing!! Hope you can help!! X

 

[chrogers]

Quick question to you now - I've also built my website using moonfruit, I currently use the "free" one and plan on buying the domain name. Does this mean I need a web host? Or would I pay for the monthly thing? I've spent ages working on my web page and don't want it to be for nothing!! Hope you can help!! X

Hi everyone! Thank you so much for your help and opinions!! They are all so gratefully appreciated! I will have a look at the eye treatments section so thanks for pointing that out for you.

In response to the moonfruit question no, you can remain on the free site setting all you need to do is purchase the domain! I unfortunately didn't research this enough, I put bought my domain from 123reg.com which was easy and simple but what I didn't realise was that you then have to pay a £11.99 transfer fee to use it on moonfruit so my advise would be purchase it directly through moonfruit hope that helps! X

 

[CrunchBunch]

Hi everyone! Thank you so much for your help and opinions!! They are all so gratefully appreciated! I will have a look at the eye treatments section so thanks for pointing that out for you.

In response to the moonfruit question no, you can remain on the free site setting all you need to do is purchase the domain! I unfortunately didn't research this enough, I put bought my domain from 123reg.com which was easy and simple but what I didn't realise was that you then have to pay a £11.99 transfer fee to use it on moonfruit so my advise would be purchase it directly through moonfruit hope that helps! X

That's weird, I've never had to pay a transfer fee, I just changed the dns servers to point to moonfruit.

 

[chrogers]

Oh man!! Why wouldn't it let me do that then :-(

 

[CrunchBunch]

Oh man!! Why wouldn't it let me do that then :-(

Dunno, could be a new thing because I did mine 12 months ago, I don't understand why you'd have to transfer the domain though. I'll have to have a squizz.

 

[chrogers]

Noooo the chances are its me being dull haha!

 

[Miss-Hallx]

Thank you! xx

 

[Smellenor]

Only one tiny criticism... On your about me section you say 'I have worked in a variety of establishments including salons, nail bars and opened and run my own business for the past 7 years'.

Maybe revisit this sentence, grammatically it doesn't sound right. To have a comma between salons & nails bars you'd need a third item to list & then separately say after you 'have been running' your own business so as to not muddle the tenses.

Sorry, I'm a complete grammar Nazi.... I can't help it!!

Sent from my GT-I9100

 

[chrogers]

God no I totally agree... Thank you! Xx

 

[Smellenor]

God no I totally agree... Thank you! Xx

you're very welcome, your site looks fab

Sent from my GT-I9100

 

[rachelt73]

I think your site looks fab Jody, if only I were nearer I'd be taking you up on some of your courses! The only comment I would add is that I think your colour photo on your profile here is nicer than the sepia one you have used and would blend into your website better, but that's just a personal preference

Love the site though, very informative, friendly and easy to navigate - well done you! x