Good effort to start with, little tip wavy hair is better than straight hair to do a pleat with and do some back combing at the back it helps give more volume and the pins stay in tighter. If I put a flower in the top my old tutor would pull it straight out as people put them in to cover up untidy work, I'm not saying that's what U've done cos its not a bad effort, keep practicing and it will get even better, good luck.