Opinions on website homepage text

[millytint]

Please would you let me know what you think of the text on my welcome page (what it says not the font lol)

A-List Beauty Therapy - Welcome

Thanks in advance xx

 

[Ruth Mills]

I'd be inclined to use the original BABTAC logo, as the one you've linked to doesn't have a transparent background, and doesn't look as good next to the black background.

 

[Bombalurina]

I like it, it says what you do and where you are clearly, without too much "faff"!! It's straight to the point.

 

[LadyL]

Please would you let me know what you think of the text on my welcome page (what it says not the font lol)

A-List Beauty Therapy - Welcome

Thanks in advance xx

Hi
Lovely site, nice colours and easy to navigate. You certainly cover a lot of treatments!

Under 'Nails' link under Infills I believe you are missing the 'f' in 'or acrylic nails'

Well done.

Lisa

 

[loubilicious]

I think it's really nice. the home page text gives the information you need without being too much!
I had a good nosey through the whole site and picked up a few minor typos/spelling errors, I hope you don't think I'm picky, but I know I would rather it be pointed out if it were me.

On the make-up page: in the customer's comment 'recommend', in the make-up lesson 'whether' and 'where'

on the Massage page: 'therapeutic'

on the Nails page 'guaranteed'

Tanning page, no pound sign beside the price for sienna x tan

Another thing I picked up which I hope you don't mind me mentioning is that your soak off includes a mini manicure for 10 pounds, which is actually cheaper than your express manicure? I also think your nail enhancement prices are low for the amount of work......and maybe guaranteeing them for 2 weeks is a bit too generous?

Lovely site, I love your News page, it shows the client your enthusiasm and that you are updating your skills regularly.

Lou xx

 

[millytint]

I think it's really nice. the home page text gives the information you need without being too much!
I had a good nosey through the whole site and picked up a few minor typos/spelling errors, I hope you don't think I'm picky, but I know I would rather it be pointed out if it were me.

On the make-up page: in the customer's comment 'recommend', in the make-up lesson 'whether' and 'where'

on the Massage page: 'therapeutic'

on the Nails page 'guaranteed'

Tanning page, no pound sign beside the price for sienna x tan

Another thing I picked up which I hope you don't mind me mentioning is that your soak off includes a mini manicure for 10 pounds, which is actually cheaper than your express manicure? I also think your nail enhancement prices are low for the amount of work......and maybe guaranteeing them for 2 weeks is a bit too generous?

Lovely site, I love your News page, it shows the client your enthusiasm and that you are updating your skills regularly.

Lou xx

Thanks for your comments girls, and especially Lou for noticing these very important things- i actually only just added the soak off service to my website a few hours ago! What price would you recommend to charge for this treatment?

Also when i say about the 2 week guarantee on my nails- this means that i will do free repairs for up to 2 weeks after a new set (i do charge after that) is this not clear/ could you suggest another way of putting it?

Its really nice of you all to be so thorough- thanks so much again

 

[millytint]

I also think your nail enhancement prices are low for the amount of work......and maybe guaranteeing them for 2 weeks is a bit too generous?

Lou xx

Also, about this lou, i have been working as a beauty therapist for 9 years but have only been doing nail extensions for a few months, this is the reason behind me only charging £20 for them, do you think it would still be ok for me to increase the price on these bearing that in mind?

Thanks in advance xxx