R D Beauty
Well-Known Member
Hi I have created my own website using yola please could you take a look and offer me constructive criticism and tips opinions
www.rdnailsandbeauty.co.uk
www.rdnailsandbeauty.co.uk
HIya
It looks really good, wish I was as clever as that. Just a couple of pointers, think Tracey may have mentioned some of these. On the first page you have said Evening Sunday and bank Holiday ... think they should be capitals. On the treatments page, under luxury manicure, you have typed it mini manicure as all one word. I would say as Tracey said, when I scrolled down and you stated treatments were "as mini manicure" you then have to look further down to see what a mini manicure is to then look as to what a luxury manicure is. Again you say mini facial and have listed it as an Express Facial.
I hope this hasn't come out as rude or picking on your work as it is not meant to be, as I am really impressed with it. Looks lovely and professional, just wanted to point out the few errors so it was looking perfect. I know I would want my to be just right. Hope that helps and again well done you. Let me know if you fancy doing a website for me!! :biggrin: xxx
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