Hey, not to sound rude, but your hair looks EXTREMELY dry and course from over-processing, your hair definitely requires another bleach, for lift i'd use BlondMe by Schwarzkopf, it gives 9+ levels lift and its the only bleach i actually believe to-date, It lifts my hair platinum in under 30 minutes (though i process for 40-50 because I'm lighter than platinum) and it doesn't dry out too much or really cause any dryness afterwards *ofcourse tht depends from person to person* but it's rather rapid but gentle in my opinion! it;s especially good for knocking out any brassiness, never have any STRONG tones with this bleach, it's perfect in my opinion! I'd use that and process probably for 20 minutes without any foil or anything *don't foil with blondme it'll cause a lot of heat and damage!!!!! this type of bleach isn't for foiling or covering!!) but that can depend how quick u lift, but ur hair still looks like a mousy blonde/dark blonde, are your ends dyed previously? They may need to be cut off it doesnt appear that they've lifted, especially near your face, all in all though you'll probably need to cut your hair into a long bob, maybe with the front layered more towards chin length in order for it to look full, because frankly they're very very sparse now, very thin :c
but make sure you tone your hair also when you bleach it, there can't be any yellow tones or they'll turn green when you put a grey over them, muddy coloured ;@ ew!! So just get it as pale as possible, if it doesn't lift try chelating and clarifying your hair then bleaching again, maybe your hair is coated in buildup of some sort preventing you from achieving an all over good, strong lift