Help with wording

[jayt]

Hi geeks can you help me with my wording on paperwork- leaflets flyer website. I want to offer free shape and polish on either toes or fingers with any manicure or pedicure purchased in march, eg

Free finger nail shape and polish with pedi
Free toe nail shape polish with manicure

Purchased in marched, I hope that makes sense it does in my head but not sure on paper !!!!!

 

[sunshineinme]

Hi Hun

I'm a foreigner so not the best person to advise on wording but are you sure you want to offer free toenail shape and polish without the whole "washing feet first and scrubbing them well" shebang?

I personally wouldn't touch unwashed feet- even my hubby's ones you know what I mean.

It's just my thought....

 

[jayt]

That's a great point, I do have sanitise spray, but may want to have a think about my offer

 

[Josie*]

New for march
Recieve a Free Express Manicure with your Pedicure in march only


Try and centralise it so ' free express manicure ' stands out and reads on its own.
Always include small print giving closing date and ' treatments must be booked together'
You could include something about mothers day on the leaflet too
Josie xx