My First Proper go at L&P sculpts

[charshaun]

This is my first proper go with L & P sculpting. I am not very good and dont offer it on my service menu yet because I dont think they are good enough so will keep practising now I have been brave enough to give it a go.

I know smiles are not even but you have to start somewhere. I like the shape but not sure if apex should be a little more defined although they do look better in real life than on the picture.

Thanks to all who take the time to critique

Charlotte X

 

[Klassy Klaws]

Well done for a first try :hug:
The photo isn't that clear but on what I can see I feel your middle finger smile is a little to far down.
I couldn't rate your sidewall and edges or the Apex as you can not see these with the photo but keep on going hun.

 

[charshaun]

Thanks for coming back to me. The photos of the apex and side walls were not good enough to post in the end so had to scrub round it. Yes I agree the middle finger smile is not consistant but if you look on the other thread (what a der brain) you will see my red sculpts and hopefully you will think them a little better for second go.

i really enjoyed myself because this is way out of my comfort zone. L&P scares me to death but I am determined to get there

Charlotte

 

[VHunter]

I didn't submit 'scores' as I can't see much of what needs to be critiqued.
However, I do see improvement from previous ones.

Smiles are a tad wonky, but free edge looks more consistent this time
They seem thinner at the free edge, but I can't be sure with this picture.

Please keep sharing!

:hug: