Flyer- Choice of two

[cantrelax]

Hi Guys,

I am putting together a new flyer at the mo. I have decided to concentrate on nails and spray tanning untill I can get something else together (easier to do on foot defo) and I won't have to rely on anyone for help.

Anyhoo, at the bottom of my flyer I have a choice of two things. Which do you think...

and...relax
In the comfort of your own home
Book with confidance

Name and number etc.

or

I am a fully qualified, fully insured beauty
therapist & nail technician.
-
I provide a friendly, relaxed service.
-
I provide first class customer service.
-
I provide a full consultation before all
treatments to ensure all your needs are met.
-
I sanitize my hands, tools and equipment
before and after each client.
-
I provide full after care advice and products to ensure that you get the most out of your
enhancements and/or beauty
treatment(s).
-
Book with confidence.​

I was thinking too much writing and it may put people off??​

 

[oey]

The second one is deffo too much writing.

Depends on how much info is on the rest of your leaflet but why not do a combination of both?

 

[JoJoPearce]

I like the first short, punchy and to the point.

You could always put the other wording on the back. Did you see the flyers I created on vista print. I had a punchy title to catch there attention and keep all the info on the back.

The other thing I would do if you decided to use the 2nd wording is to amend each line and not to start them with 'I......' as it reads a little like a stammer IMO. Here's an example:

​

I am a fully qualified, fully insured beauty
therapist & nail technician.
-
Friendly and relaxed first class customer service.
-
A full consultation is provided before all
treatments to ensure all your needs are met.
-
I sanitize my hands, tools and equipment
before and after each client.
-
Full after care advice and products to ensure that you get the most out of your
treatment.


Here's a link to my flyer. http://www.salongeek.com/nail-geek/47848-my-flyer-what-do-you-think.html?highlight=my+flyer[/CENTER][/CENTER]

 

[cantrelax]

Ok, thanks Girls. Puttin the info on the back is a good idea. Why didn't I think of that????!! lol

Perfect 10...your amendments are great. xxx

 

[~Freckles~]

how about ~

and...relax
providing a friendly and relaxed service in the comfort of your own home.
fully qualified & fully insured...book with confidence

(follow with your name and number)

 

[Apex73]

and...relax

Nails & Spray Tanning
In the comfort of your own home
Book with confidence​

Name and number etc.​

​

I like this one the most Alex. It would be good under your business name. I took the liberty of adding the second line giving an outline of what you will offer. :hug:​

or

I am a fully qualified, fully insured beauty
therapist & nail technician.
-
I provide a friendly, relaxed service.
-
I provide first class customer service.
-
I provide a full consultation before all
treatments to ensure all your needs are met.
-
I sanitize my hands, tools and equipment
before and after each client.
-
I provide full after care advice and products to ensure that you get the most out of your
enhancements and/or beauty
treatment(s).
-
Book with confidence.​

I was thinking too much writing and it may put people off??​

You could probably use this too, because even though there are a lot of words, the words are relevant & help mark you out as a professional.
Good Luck Hunny :hug:

 

[cantrelax]

Ok guys, thanks so much!:hug:

I have changed it and changed it but don't want to change it again! lol
I am happy with it....I think:green:

Cheers xx