The Welcome page has a few errors. "
Would love a facial but don't have time?" "
Well no need
to stress any longer.." "No
more going in to the cold after a massage.."
On the About Boutiques Mobile Beauty page, you need to change the i to "I provide treatments to the following areas..."
About Your Therapist page has a couple of errors too. Being picky, you need to place a space between the comma and "I have been in the beauty industry..." line.
Telford College I presume should be in capitals.
Again there is another i that needs to be I on the second paragraph down.
Third paragraph, Musselburgh needs to be capitalised.
Fourth paragraph, Prestonpans needs to be capitalised too.
Also meant is misspelt and should be meant.
Fifth paragraph, beauty industry is misspelt and another two i's need to be changed to I.
On the Loyalty page, there is a spelling mistake in the third paragraph: "To show how much
your custom...". Also the How It Works on the page looks a little off and to the left.
I think you just need to go through and look at your punctutation and spelling. There are words that need to be capitalised, and others that are that don't really need to be. I think to make a site look professional, all these things need to be taken into consideration.
I think the black and white logos need to be made a bit smaller too, so everything is balanced.
I feel like all I've left is negative remarks, but it is a good site and you can tell you have put a lot of time and effort putting it together. Thumbs up!
