I think the site is great, nice shade of pink! I agree the text needs to be much smaller, the smaller it is the more professional the site will look. Also this will bring your links at the bottom of the page up higher, if you are worried about a lack of what to say or put on your front page fill the space will promotions and keep them fresh otherwise clients will look once and never again.
On the point of clients looking once, give them a reason to look! As I said above about changing offers but how about online booking? I've started using
Appointment-Diary.com - Online Appointment Diary and Scheduling Software and found clients are going on my website all the time to book, plus they see my special offers and a lot of them end up booking them too!
I agree about the pic on the front page with the star, use that in a later page, the pic of the girl in your hair prices page would probably look better?
Also agree on your pricing, once you take into account petrol and your traveling time you won't make much profit, don't forget you offer convenience so that worth paying a little extra for!
Good luck hun! x :hug: