Need feeback on wording for my web site homepage, pretty please !!

[blush09]

ok, i obviously havent posted it here -
but i can pm it to anyone who is good at putting together copy .. and who wouldnt mind helping me to tweek it a little, here and there
many thanks
blush09

 

[YSL]

are you talking about marketing wording or terms and conditions?

 

[Violet Star]

Hi Hun.

Pm me and ill help you

:hug:

 

[wowbb]

Websites can be very tricky as you want them to look good, have nice text but at the same time trigger the search engines to get you up there and found by your clients....

If you want to pm me an I can have a look and see if we can tweak it to make it look nice and effective at the same time?

:hug:

 

[Emily9]

Hi hun,

If you PM me i'll have a go at helping you out

Emily x

 

[blush09]

awwww .. thanks for offering to help
have pmd it to you all - sorry it does go on a bit, lol
ysl - its the marketing i need for the moment
many thanks
blush

 

[StudioTracker]

Hi. I'm the marketing manager for Studio Tracker. I have written an article on how salon owners (even those who aren't the most technically minded) can utilise the Internet to grow their business and posted it on our blog. Have a gander and let me know if it helps. Thanks!