Let me know your thoughts!

geekling

Active Member
#1
Hi geeks!
Just wanting your opinions on my website please!

& My prices! Although please remember my area is extreemly cheep!

Its still a work in progress but let me know if you think something needs added/removed etc! Or just your general thoughts!


Thank you!!

Oh So Beautiful Ashington | Wix.com
 

Beansy

Active Member
#2
Hi geeks!
Just wanting your opinions on my website please!

& My prices! Although please remember my area is extreemly cheep!

Its still a work in progress but let me know if you think something needs added/removed etc! Or just your general thoughts!


Thank you!!

Oh So Beautiful Ashington | Wix.com

Um... on the iPhone that link takes you to Niki Brown's photography site......?
 
#3
Hi geeks!
Just wanting your opinions on my website please!

& My prices! Although please remember my area is extreemly cheep!

Its still a work in progress but let me know if you think something needs added/removed etc! Or just your general thoughts!


Thank you!!

Oh So Beautiful Ashington | Wix.com
I clicked the link hun and it come up with a photography site? Xxx
 

geekling

Active Member
#4
Really? Are you on your phone?

Maybe thats why? xxx
 

geekling

Active Member
#5
Mobile site finished, i'm not sure how it looks! You had to create 2 different websites!
 
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geekling

Active Member
#6
just bumping back up!
 

#7
Just had a quick glance and first thing I thought was - There's no apostrophe in tattoos :) x
 

geekling

Active Member
#8
Ahh! My spelling is terrible!! LOL! Will change that now! Thank you! :) xxx
 

#9
Had a deeper reckie and I really like it, well done. It has quite a few gramma and spelling mistakes but nothing to lose any sleep over!
Looks lovely and clean, very easy to use - ooh but I didn't see any prices? (probably me being a dinkus)
From my web analytics I see that people come to my website's homepage (mostly from google Adwords) and go straight to prices and then to photos and lastly contact.
Hth? x
 

#10
Yup it was me being an idiot I see them now, very nice :) x
 

MissJulesBeauty

Well-Known Member
#11
Hey well done, your prices seem very competitive and professional

I love the colour scheme too x

I don't find the big space at the top of each web page but thats a personal opinion x the content is fab though x you should be really chuffed :) x
 

geekling

Active Member
#12
Thanks hun! Website analytics completely confuse me LOL!
Will get momma bear to look through for spelling mistakes! She manages to spot them! Haha! :) xxx
 

#13
Spray Tanning -*
Get Bronzed!

Full body ____________________£15
*
Renewal full body ____________________£18
*Renewal tan must be used within 10 days.


Is this a mix up in prices ? :) page looks nice! Xx

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geekling

Active Member
#14
Thankyou! Its the same as my business cards :)
And yes, that annoys me! Off to try and change that now! :) xxx
 

geekling

Active Member
#15
Hehe!! OOOOPS! Yes, yes it is!! I have had to lower my price from £20 to £15! Because it was too much for my area! Never changed my renewal price! LOL xx
 
#16
Looks nice! very clean , down to business and modern! nice job!
 

geekling

Active Member
#17
#18
I like it hun :).

Only thing is the grammar. For example you only use an apostrophe for
1) when something belongs to someone E.g lisa's dog
2) when u shorten a word e.g do not = don't

So words that are purley plural like 'nails' dont have an apostrophe.
Sorry to be so picky but that is a bugbear of mine lol!

Don't wanna patronize u just hope that helps!

Anyways apart from that the site looks great. Simple but professional.

Well done :)
 

geekling

Active Member
#19
Thanks hun! It's a great help! Don't want to be looking like I can't spell do i? Xxx
 
#20
Hehe brains and beauty ;) xxx
 
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