My first critique request!

[twinkletoes910]

Hi Geeks!

I'm so excited to ask for a critique! This is a set of l&p sculpts that I did this morning.
Fyi, I used Creative l&p perfect color powders in pink and soft white.

View from above:
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m48/freakingenius910/Picture229.jpg

from the side:
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m48/freakingenius910/Picture231.jpg

barrel shot:
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m48/freakingenius910/Picture230.jpg

I'll have to perfect my photography skills to get a good barrel shot picture. They're a large size so you can zoom in and get a good look.

I can't wait to get some constructive feedback! Thanks ya'll!

**edited to add** I think I messed up the little rank thingie.... I'd like to know about the smile, apex, shape and length.

 

[lotus blossom]

i think they look very ,very lovely,
i would have loved to see close ups, but overall they are great,
the only thing i would say is that on the barrel shot, the edges look a bit too thick, but just by bevelling the edges this will sort it out, and maybe just by bringing the sidewalls in a tiny bit straighter will result in a sleeker nail,
but i think they look fab and would be very happy if they were on the ends of my fingers
well done you xxx

 

[Prionace]

I think those are excelent salon nails and any customer would feel very proud leaving with those nails. The thing i would improve is the shape, it isn't very consistent in the 10 nails, some look more rounded some more square.

 

[joe90]

I would be happy if you had done these for me. They look fab.

 

[twinkletoes910]

Here's some super close up pics. Any instructions on how to get a good barrel shot picture? They do look thicker in the pic than what I remember.


http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m48/freakingenius910/supercloseup.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m48/freakingenius910/closeup3.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m48/freakingenius910/closeup2.jpg

Thanks for the critiques!!! Geeks ROCK!

 

[lotus blossom]

Here's some super close up pics. Any instructions on how to get a good barrel shot picture? They do look thicker in the pic than what I remember.


http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m48/freakingenius910/supercloseup.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m48/freakingenius910/closeup3.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m48/freakingenius910/closeup2.jpg

Thanks for the critiques!!! Geeks ROCK!

you should be dead proud, i think they are great!! good all round wearable salon nails go girl!!

 

[pure]

I really like those a lot! They look lovely and natural.
Well done.

 

[Peter Pan]

overall i think you did a good job

critique points:

sidewalls could be straighter
barrel shot: your c-curve is good - but you could make them more "cresent moon" shaped rather than a band that is the same thickness - i made the very same mistake flower, so dont take it to heart.

but as i said - i think you done a good job, considering its your first go - well done