These are gel, right? I'm going to base my critique on that...
First off, I think the overall length, shape and color are nice. They look very clean and healthy. I don't think the free edge is too long, though I think it would look more balanced with a deeper smile line - yours are a bit flat and are missing sharp ears. It's hard to get sharp ears with gel, so that will come with time.
I think in general, the nails need more refinement. It's near impossible to get a sharp-looking, beautiful nail with gel without a file before the top gloss. It would get rid of the slightly "wobbly" look. The sidewalls need some tidying up. And you have touched the skin on most of the nails with either the gel or the top gloss. This will more than likely lift significantly before her next rebalance. It's also an overexposure risk. A tiny margin should be left around the whole enhancement. I'm betting it's just the top gloss, though, meaning you probably just used too much. Could also have been prevented with refinement before the file, so there was room for the gloss.
I hope I haven't been too harsh, but it did say "give it to me straight" and with just a little tweeking, these could be amazing!