gemsie1983
Well-Known Member
Just posting this on behalf of nailniche as she is having a few probs! Hope this works:hug:
Hi,
Flyer looks good, just two things I have noticed.
1) It might be worth while mentioning where you are based or the areas that you cover.
2) The sentence structure of one sentence is wrong. I am looking for ..... enhanced. At a reduced .......
There should not be a full stop after the word enhanced, but rather a comma, as you are breaking the natural flow of sentence and therefore does not make a lot of sense.
Hope this helps.
Thanks for that, I hadn't really noticed. it has been adjusted now and seems to make more sense. Good job you pointed it out before it had gone to the printer. thanks hun:lol:
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