Would you take a few moments to critique my new website??..

[swilks12]

Hi fello geeks,

after lots of hard work Gavin from crunch web design has designed what i think is a bloomin great website!..by the way he is very reasonably priced and knows his stuff so if you are considering investing in a website you couldn't go far wrong!

www.crunch-card.co.uk (not uploaded yet to my proper domain name)

I would be really grateful if you would all cast your professional eye over it before it goes 'live' on the world wide web!!

All feedback much appreciated! :Love:

 

[jujojones]

i think it looks fab! very informative and love the description of all the treatments etc! i only had a quick look but it is very easy to use and understand!

the only think i would change if u could is the pricer list, to have the prices justifed eg a space in-between rather than the price being right next to it! just easier to read i think!

you have a fab professional and lovely looking website!#

 

[Miss Pink23]

I too like the website, very informative and well-designed.
But, I think the writing is too small and also, although a great design feature, I dont like how the icons are in a green hue until you hover over them and they turn into full colour.
Also, you say on mon and tues you dont open until 11am and wed 9:30, yet on another page you say that morning club is open from 9am?

 

[Miss Pink23]

Also just having a read and there are quite a few grammatical errors and some duplicated words.

 

[Jack1102]

text is small, and the lines are too squashed together..


I could go on, but I shall wait and see others points of view first, as if I start it will end up as an essay

 

[Jaffacake]

Only thing that I really picked up on was your spray tan offer 'Spray tan Thursdays'... I find that Thursdays are one of my busiest as everyone wants to be tanned for the Fri/Sat night out. If it were me i'd do the offer as maybe 'Spray Tan Tuesdays' to get people in on one of the less busy days...

 

[Miss Pink23]

Only thing that I really picked up on was your spray tan offer 'Spray tan Thursdays'... I find that Thursdays are one of my busiest as everyone wants to be tanned for the Fri/Sat night out. If it were me i'd do the offer as maybe 'Spray Tan Tuesdays' to get people in on one of the less busy days...

Blimey yes I missed that. If I offered a discount for tans (or any treatment really) on a Thursday, I would be over-run. Definitely make that a day at the beginning of the week.

 

[swilks12]

hi all, thanks for your comments, i don't mean to be rude, but i am after critique re the website etc rather than on the offers that I am running, I have been running the spraytan offer for some time now with success and this is what i have designed the morning club for ( i know the opening hrs need changing to reflect this!!) to fill my quieter times.

There are some helpfull comments that have emerged so far though so i will feed these back and see if Gavin can help me to improve them!

Keep the comments coming re the website (good or bad!) :Love:

 

[lissa]

very nice but omg i ypou do so much !!!!! i guess you never get bored

i like it it's nice with a relaxed feel x

 

[swilks12]

text is small, and the lines are too squashed together..


I could go on, but I shall wait and see others points of view first, as if I start it will end up as an essay

Wow is there that much to comment on?!?..seriously though i would be grateful if you would make any more comments you feel relevant.

 

[SJK]

I like it. I don't normally like the brown/lime colour scheme but you've made it work. I think it looks a good website - but then I'm not a professional.

I totally love the morning club idea and think it's brill.

 

[Claire83]

Wow, you do so much!

I think the website looks great, very professional.

Personally, I'm not that keen on the images down the left menu and on the treatments page being the green hue, I think keeping their original colours would work much better. The green outline looks good though and ties them in with the website.

Also on the home page the slideshow looks a little pixellated, I think the pictures could be much clearer but that could just be my computer?

I think that the prices on the price list page could be separated which would make them easier on the eye. Plus the * for the the skin sensitivity test would be far more noticable to those not in the know with those kind of things.

 

[jacquelineanna]

I like the colours and I like the morning club page

I stopped reading on every page after less than 10 seconds cos there's just to much to read.

Jacqui xx

 

[kateyork1]

Hi there,

It does look really lovely. There are a couple of things though - in my opinion there is too much wasted space at the side. The only other thing really is I think the price list would be more readable as a table - one for each thing eg. a table for facial treatments, then another for nail enhancements. Really nice looking site though. I would also ask your designer to look more at the optimisation of the site - no point having one if it's not going to be found by search engines Good luck with it.
Kate

 

[nixnewcastle]

The text wrote about your facials starts off talking about md formulations then switches to dermalogica. Which skincare do u use as this is very confusing?

 

[TracyS]

Loving the logo and the colours - not usually my favourite colours but think they work really well, especially the 'bubbles' effect (although I am craving chocolate and it made me think of aero!!!).

Agree with what others have said about the price list, i found it hard to negotiate my eyes around it so a more uniform layout might work better.

I know what nix means about the facials (MD & Dermalogica), I understand from reading further on that you're offering 2 skin care ranges but not sure that this is obvious to jo public on your home page - maybe just a rewording.

Gramatically it needs a tweek here and there but that's probably just going to take a fresh pair of eyes.

All in all I like a lot!

(And take no notice of Jack1102 - he's my other half and can get really picky about stuff that tbh he doesn't know as much about as he thinks he does!)

T.x

 

[BotoxBoy]

Hi,

I've also just launched my website so if anyone could have a quick look and give some feedback that would be fantastic! Thanks!

Adam

www.awaesthetics.com

 

[smooth]

I clicked on the link but it was broken!! Sorry but I can't leave feedback x